Writing a recount - A student example (pre edit): The Tent

My family and I went camping in Botswana. We lived in Botswana before I moved here. We always went camping it was normal.

We had been camping for 3 days when a huge storm hit. The storm carried on for whole night.I could not sleep. Suddenly our tent blew over. Gus and Zeke shot up and dashed outside to tell my parents.

I was left all by my self. It was really freaky and fun at the same time. It was a very weird feeling.

We all ended up sleeping in my parents tent. In the morning we set the tent back up.