Persuasive writing - First attempt using powerful words

Persuasive writing - First attempt using powerful words

We  should not have school uniforms because everybody will look the same. We will not be able to see people’s personality and may get mixed up.

For example I might say “Hello Tommy” but it is really Sal.

Uniforms are disgusting and should be banned forever and ever.

Lukas

We should keep animals as pets. Animals are special to us. They are like our family. Pets are useful and they are brave. When you are lonely your pets can play with you. They are not horrifying like you think. They can also be very useful. We should keep animals as pets.  

Panha

Homework should not be banned because we need more time to think and learn more about what you are actually learning in the classroom. It also gives you other opportunities to recall what you have learned. So it is better to have homework.

Seo Yeon

We should definitely not keep animals as pets because they can be extremely dangerous to our health. In fact when animals get sick they can make you extremely sick. Most deadly disease comes from animals and disease can be very powerful. For example Jed’s brother got sick from cleaning the fish tank because the water was dirty. Don’t try this at home!

Also when animals bite you you will be sick.

Nikor

Homework should not be banned because it is a good exercise for practicing being independent. If we do not get homework what will we become when we grow up. We won’t be able to think by ourselves and we will never get good grades.

Kanika

We need to have homework. If we do not have homework we will not learn at home and understand anything your teacher has taught you. To be successful in the future and grow up and be grave and knowledgeable you need to have homework.

Sal

Homework should be banned because it makes you unbalanced. It takes away your time to have fun and play sports. We want torturous homework banned pronto. Kids want to be free.

Tommy

We should keep animals for pets because we care for them. I feel that animals need an owner. Someone to love them and care for them. Someone they can trust. In fact we people are what keeps those darling, fluffy pets alive.

If we did not keep animals as pets they would die and become extinct.If all animals became extinct this would be a sad and lonely world.

Shelby

Homework should be banned because it gives us too much stress every day and stops us doing our everyday things. It makes our mind think uncontrollably. Evidence is that homework stops us from doing our favorite hobbies and things we like to do. For these reasons homework causes lots of problems so that is why homework should be banned - Pronto !!

Vattanak

Homework wastes your time. Instead of doing homework you could be relaxing or reading. You could be going on playdates and shopping. I am also sure that if you didn’t do homework you would spend more time with your family.

In fact homework makes you miss out on everything. You can’t go and explore the world because you are doing your homework. If we have homework we surely miss out on the other things people are doing. With homework kids are not be free of the world.

Jayco

We should have school uniform. it is certain that we should have school uniform because it represents our school and shows our spirit. If we go on a very good, like the best field trip ever we won’t get lost out of nowhere. The teacher will always see us so we do not risk our lives.

Teppi

We should keep pets. Pets are very important. They protect us from danger and they can be our best friend. Animals play with us when we are lonely. If you are lost your pet can find a way home for you. In fact animals love their owners and are kind to them. Animals are very important in our lives and we need to care for them and keep them healthy.

Kelly

We should not keep those ugly cats and dogs (AKA furballs) as pets. They do not have their freedom. It is not fair that we have freedom and they don’t.

Boranay

We should not have school uniform. They are a waste of money. If we keep wearing the same uniform each day you will need many shirts which will cost a lot of money.

Lei Jun

I strongly believe we should not have useless, stinky and ugly uniforms now. We should not worry about uniforms because homework is enough stress for us weak kids. it is not fair that you punish us for not wearing our stinky wet uniform. I strongly believe that uniforms should be banned starting now.

Lyka