Narrative writing

The students have been editing and publishing narrative writing. Here are some samples ...

I was eating my lunch when a gigantic shadow fell over me. It was the school bully. He was looking at my lunch and lickingbhis lips. He said in a deep growly voice “Give me your lunch”. It was my favorite lunch, fried rice and I was hungry. “No” I yelled back at him. He glared at me. “Lets have a thumb war” he said “If I win, you will be my servant”.

I accepted the challenge. My heart was beating hard. My hand was trembling with fear. Sweat rolled down my face. My thumb was between his…..

Lyka

It was my first time riding a rollercoaster. I was excited. We started moving and I could already hear people screaming. My Uncle said ”If you are scared close your eyes”. I replied that “I am not scared’ and left my eyes open. I looked around me. We were on top. I started to say “Wow, it is so highhh” and then whoosh we were going down.

Bunleng

I am in my bed and I hear an evil sound. I opened my eyes and jumped out of bed. I tiptoed carefully towards the door. I stopped and froze. I saw evil and evil saw me. I ran from the scary monster and hid in my closet.

Jungho

“Hurry” shouted Agent Teemo as he ran for the door. “Sector Two, we need assistance. Do you copy? We need assistance” said Draven. “Sector two has been cut off. We need need help to get the master out” shouted Draven.

BunSan

The zombies were chasing me. I was running really fast. Sweat was dripping down my face. I was so scared I almost fainted. Everything in here was dead. I ran and looked for a place to hide. I crouched down behind a tree.

Panhaboth

My heart is beating. My legs are shaky. I am super scared. I put my feet on the edge of the pool, my toes clenched. I look up and see my friends reassuring face. I take a deep breath. I hear a whistle loud in my ears. My feet push off the wall.

I peek a look through my arm. I see my friends cheering faces. i plunge my face back into the water. I hear the crowds cheers while underwater. I’m nearing the finish line. I have to believe in myself. I am going as fast as I can. I reach in front of me and touch the wall. I made it! Relief rushes over me.

Ella

When my owners are not home I turn into a human. I managed to keep this secret for five years but one day Lenard saw me as a human. I was really worried. My hands were trembling in fear that he would expose my secret. Luckily Lenard is not a bad boy. I sat him down and told him everything. He decided to help me keep this secret from our parents.

Moneth