Today in Language with Ms Marcelle the students wrote poems about an adjective.
We started the exercise discussing the word delicious.
Some students used this as their theme. Other students chose a different word as their theme.
They thought about the adjective as a person and used similes and antonyms
to add depth to their poem.
Here are some of the Personification poems the students wrote in small groups ....
DELICIOUS
Delicious is an awesome, tasty guy.
He makes an appearance when you are feeling happy
and excited about your delightful food.
Delicious makes your mouth water.
It is a heavenly meal, fit for a King.
If there was no deliciousness how would we survive.
Delicious is not ugly, offensive, repulsive or nasty
Instead he will make you want more.
By Sal and Lukas
ADORABLE
Adorable is a polished, sparkling girl.
She likes to make an appearance when she see’s
something cute that she cannot resist.
Or when something is eye catching.
Adorable makes us want to hug it.
She will say it is charming.
She will ask “Can I keep it?”.
Her sister Graceful is very much the same.
These charming adjectives make people fall in love.
Together they combat awful.
Adorable won’t be hateful.
She will make us desire it.
By Kelly and Lyka
SHINY
Shiny is a polished, sparkling girl.
She likes to make an appearance when it is a sunny day,
or when she is in a shimmering ballroom.
Shiny will say ‘Look at me”.
She will ask “Do you want a diamond?”.
Her sister Shimmer has a new dress with a lot of diamonds, just like shiny.
She is shiny and glimmers.
Together they make beauty look real.
By Kanika, Jayco and Shelby
DELICIOUS
Delicious is a scrumptiously tasty guy.
He makes an appearance when your favorite food is served.
Your mouth starts to water when you smell something heavenly.
It will taunt you until it comes and he will say “Its amazing”.
Delicious will ask ‘Do you like it?”
His and his sister Yummy are a great family together.
They fight disgustingness.
Deliciousness will not wave you off.
He will help you fall asleep, content.
By Tommy and Jed
ATHLETIC
Athletic is a healthy, sporty guy.
He likes to make an appearance when we do exercise.
Or when dribbling.
Athletic will write out the word we will do - work out.
He’ll say “If you do more exercise you will be healthier than me”.
He would ask “If I did not exist what would happen?”
His brother is powerful.
He has the same qualities as Athletic.
Together they combat unhealthy.
Athletic will not make you weak.
Athletic helps by making us very sporty.
By Lei Jun, Nikor and Panha
SURPRISING
Surprising is an unpredictable, shocking guy.
He likes to make an appearance when you get a gift
you never thought you would have.
Or when someone scares you to death.
Surprising is like a little heart attack.
He will make you jump.
He will say “Surprise!”
Surprise will ask you “Are you startled?”
His brother Astonishing is also sudden.
Together they combat normal.
Surprise will not be predictable.
Surprise will boggle you.
By Teppi and Vattanak
DELICIOUS
Delicious is a yummy, tasty girl.
She likes to make an appearance
when you are eating your favorite food.
Or when you taste ice cream.
Delicious will make your mouth water.
She is tasty and amazing.
She will ask” Can I taste that amazing pizza?”
Her brother Tasty is a lot like her.
Together they make you beg for more and
will combat terrible.
Delicious tastes scrumptious.
By Seo Yeon and Boranay
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