We started by folding up an A3 sheet of paper into sections for the Introduction, Body and Conclusion. They also had room down the sides to lists 'Words to think' and 'Words to Write'.
The students created examples of connective words they think - Ie first, next, then, also.
They then thought of examples of words they can use in their writing that are more formal - words to write. Example: furthermore, additionally, another reason, additionally, expands, promotes, simulates.
They then thought of ideas for their arguments. they used the structure of the boxes to set up their writing. Firstly Minecraft expands creative thinking ...
We followed a format for writing the Introduction.
This included - What is Minecraft? What can it do? A general comment showing its popularity.
We also followed a format for writing the conclusion. We mentioned a word from each of the three arguments and stated our own view.
The students then went back to their three arguments and thought of an example that helped explain or support the argument.
When we finished all the activities and read the page from top to bottom we had a clear, organized, interesting persuasive piece of writing.
Examples …
Minecraft is a high tech simulation of the real world. Minecraft has many uses.
It can be used to build houses and plant crops. Minecraft is enjoyed by people around the world. I will explain three reasons why we should have extra minecraft lessons.
Firstly Minecraft expands creative thinking. It can help students be creative in real life situations. They can invent, build, make and grow products.
Additionally Minecraft educates students about managing money. The students learn how to create budgets and try to make profit within the budget. This will help students learn to use money wisely in the future.
Finally Minecraft develops students thinking skills and problem solving skills. Students need to build and fix products when they are not working. They need to consider safety so they do not lose lives and solve design problems.
In conclusion Minecraft helps students learn how to manage money, be creative and a problem solver. I believe that we should have additional minecraft lessons as provide very valuable lessons for all students.
Written by Lei Jun
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